Today I made a presentation on my favorite comic book:) I hope everyone understood what I meant. 3 minutes was too short for me to present my passion about One Piece :P If anyone got interested in the comic, I have them at home so please tell me!
Good points... You used lots of interesting visuals so it attracted the audience's attention. Also, from the way you presented it, such as the graph showing your predictions, I could tell you really liked one piece. Another good point was that you tried to make eye contact with the audience. Lastly, using statistics, like the number of languages it is translated in, made a strong impression.:)
Things you could improve... You spoke a bit fast, maybe because you were nervous? so you might want to slow down more. Also, you used "umm..." alot, so it might be better just to cut that out and make it a pause. Lastly, your intonation went up alot so try keeping it down in a firm way.:D
I have wanted to read one piece for over a year! My friends tell me that I have to read it. After listening to your presentation, I became more interested in it!
Hi!This is some feedback on your presentation.
ReplyDeleteGood points...
You used lots of interesting visuals so it attracted the audience's attention. Also, from the way you presented it, such as the graph showing your predictions, I could tell you really liked one piece. Another good point was that you tried to make eye contact with the audience. Lastly, using statistics, like the number of languages it is translated in, made a strong impression.:)
Things you could improve...
You spoke a bit fast, maybe because you were nervous? so you might want to slow down more. Also, you used "umm..." alot, so it might be better just to cut that out and make it a pause. Lastly, your intonation went up alot so try keeping it down in a firm way.:D
I have wanted to read one piece for over a year! My friends tell me that I have to read it. After listening to your presentation, I became more interested in it!